please help me to edit this sentence.
".., public were not needing to know latest news about goverment. "
its very emergency !
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bioiso |
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please help me to edit this sentence. ".., public were not needing to know latest news about goverment. " its very emergency ! |
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jarp81 |
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Hi bioiso,
This is challenging as your sentence is wisely said...I suggest these two ones " The latest news hadn't been told to the public by government " or " the public did not need to know the latest news about the government" |
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Lynne Hand |
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I would say: "Someone decided that the public didn't need to know the latest news about the government."
I added the "Someone decided that..." because of course the public need to know what their government is doing in their name. |
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