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Hello Lynne, At the moment I am sitting on my desk and writing a post to this forum.After sometime I will go to sleep.I know I have done many mistakes in this
post. Please make the corrections and a very thank you to you from me in advance.
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Sjz,
Here's your correction. Sorry for the delay, but there were problems on Yuku. I'm sitting in my chair, drinking a cup of coffee and learning English. (You can combine the sitting, drinking and learning, because you are doing them simultaneously and they are related.) |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Rihanna,
You didn't make that many mistakes. Here's your correction:- Hello Lynne, At the moment I am sitting at my desk and writing a post to this forum. After some time I will go to sleep. I know I have made many mistakes in this post. Please make the corrections and a big thank you in advance. |
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sakilevy |
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Hello Lyne,
I'm sitting in front of my computer like usual and thinking whether to get some sleep or to mingle some more on the net. I have just come back from a book fair at city central (and oh boy, was it crowded). So many rare old books with very low price (is there any idiom for 'low-price' in English?), local and imported, were being exhibited. Too bad I have this kind of dust-allergic, so I couldn't stop sneezing at the booths. And my sister was kinda in cranky mood too, what with her having a bad day in the office, so I didn't enjoy the fair as much as I've been thought. Now I'm so sleepy and nearly reach the level of incoherent blabbing. Good night all. |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Sakilevy,
Here's your correction:- Hello Lyne, I'm sitting in front of my computer, as usual, and thinking whether to get some sleep or to mingle some more on the net. I have just come back from a book fair in the city centre (and oh boy, was it crowded). Many rare old books with very low prices (is there any idiom for 'low-price' in English?), local and imported, were being exhibited. Too bad I have this kind of dust-allergy, so I couldn't stop sneezing in the booths. And my sister was kind of in a cranky mood too, what with her having a bad day in the office, so I didn't enjoy the fair as much as I thought I would. Now I'm so sleepy I have nearly reached the level of incoherent blabbing. Good night all. !Note - I am allergic to dust. / I have a dust allergy. (is there any idiom for 'low-price' in English?) - "Cheap as chips." / "Going for a song." / "Dirt cheap." |
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jam |
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I am eating an apple and at once and I am brushing my teeth
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Jam,
Here's your correction:- I am eating an apple and at the same time I am brushing my teeth. |
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rihanna19 |
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Hello Lynee, How are you?
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Rihanna,
I'm fine thanks. Here's your correction:- Hello Lynne, How are you? I have just woken upand now I am going to have a bath. |
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crnka |
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Hello... I am sitting on the desk, and writing you a message... Afterwards I will go to my bed, because I am very tired.. I was with my friends on the caffe..
and after that we went to the shopping... Shopping make my tired...i know that I have many mistake and I really want that you tell me were I do mistake. And
can you tell me the way how I can learn vocabullary quick?? Because I don't have a time...
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AL GANNAS |
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Hello ,
I am sitting in front of my computer , drinking the water and writing a post to tell you what I'm doing naw. |
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thuhuong5588 |
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hi, i'm huong
i'm learning english online, writting words, listenning to music i'm dealling with my customers i'm booking the entries i'm thinking about the price up of every goods in my country....... |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Crnka,
I'm afraid you'll have to make some time. Here are a few tips on how to learn vocabulary. Here's your correction:-
Hello,
I am sitting at my desk and writing you a message. Afterwards I will go to bed, because I am very tired.. I was with my friends at a cafe, and after that we went shopping. Shopping makes me tired. I know that I have made many mistakes and I really want you to tell me where I make them, and how I can learn vocabulary quickly. Because I don't have time. |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Al,
Here's your correction:-
Hello,
I am sitting in front of my computer, drinking some water and writing a post to tell you what I'm doing now. |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Huong,
Here's today's correction:- Hi, I'm Huong. I'm learning English online, writing words, and listening to music. I'm dealing with customers, booking the entries and I'm thinking about the price increase of all goods in my country. !Note - be careful when doubling up vowel endings. Have a look at the English spelling guide. |
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lazyworker |
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I'm listening music and i am a little tired.
Actually i don't know what to do at this moment just surfing in the internet . i am a little hungry .I need to eat some food. |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Lazyworker,
Here's a quick correction:- I'm listening to music and I am a little tired. Actually I don't know what to do at the moment, so I'm just surfing the internet . I am feeling a little hungry. I need to eat something. |
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setayesh |
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Hi Lynne,
How are you? I'm sitting in front of my computer and writting a post to you. By the way, do you heared of Hafez? |
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Lynne Hand |
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Hi Setayesh,
You're not the first person to ask me about Hafez. Here's a quick correction:- Hi Lynne, How are you? I'm sitting in front of my computer and writing a post to you. By the way, have you heard of Hafez?
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luisggc |
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I'm studying English, because I will travel for London.
I'm cooking a Fish and Chip, becuase I'm a lot of hungry, and that food traditional in United Kingdom. |
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